Posted by David on July 26, 2003 at 15:11:03:
In Reply to: A long half-meaningful poem. posted by Anonymous on July 26, 2003 at 13:56:43:
This evokes for me the image of a farmer finding remains from a long-ago battle in his field. "Turned" "till" "covered" and then the great ending, "my shovel twists".
: 3360 sort of meant something to me, but then it lost me at the word sequence "berry good golden"
: the turned sword covered bodies
: guiding some wholesomeness in till
: densimetric evulsions round eye till
: invectively blood into berry good golden they
: yummy previsions devotions drew we the
: fight solidifying look do
: my shovel twists